Kia ora people. This week we had to do our 100 word count. The prompt that we had to use was a sentence, the sentence was I’m trying to hold on,’ he shouted
I had exactly 100 words.I hope you enjoy reading my story.
“Ahh hold on” I shouted.
“Help, help, help, help, help, help, help” Came from a boy's voice.
“Hold on” I kept shouting.
"L’m trying to hold on", he shouted. “I can’t hold on for any longer.” I was shouting a million times.
A voice I have never heard before said, “ We're coming.”
“Help Help Help,” I shouted but nobody could hear me. Oh no what's that. “ A shark, a shark, a shark, help, help, help the shark is going to bite my arm off, help, help help! My arm, my arm, it's gone,” I never got found and I died.
What an interesting word count Leala.
ReplyDeleteI wasn't sure what to expect but the ending was completely different to what I thought was going to happen.
I thought someone was stuck in a tree and that they were going to fall.
Thank you for making me laugh.
I hope you are having a wonderful holiday.