Kia ora. This week for our 100 word count prompt was a picture. This weeks picture was a picture that had an polar bear floating on an pieces of ice.
here is my 100 word count
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Kia ora. This week for our 100 word count prompt was a picture. This weeks picture was a picture that had an polar bear floating on an pieces of ice.
here is my 100 word count
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
hello everybody. Today for the summer learning journey I did this thing called victor art. I choose the blue Kirby. Victor art is when you ...
I like the idea of going to Fiji Leala,especially on these cold days.
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This polar bear looks very lonely.Maybe while you are dreaming you could dream up your sister being a fish and you could chase her in the ocean😊.
Hi Leala, It is great that you were able to include information about the prompt in your story. I agree with Mrs Cassidy that going to Fiji sounds awesome. It looks like you have tried to vary your sentence length and you have some long and short sentences in there.
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